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段落結構
第二課:Supporting
Details
當你決定了主題句
(Topic sentence)後,下一步便是提出論點,支持或說明你的主題句,包括:
Examples, information, evidence, facts etc.
例如:
A final examination in a course will
give a student the initiative to do his or her best work throughout
the course. Students who are only taking notes and attending classes
in order to pass a few short tests will not put forth their best
effort. For instance, some of my friends in drama, in which there is
no final examination, take poor notes, which they throw away after
each short test. Skipping classes also becomes popular. Imagine the
incredible change a final examination would produce. Students would
have to take good notes and attend all classes in order to be
prepared for the final examination.
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Suzanne Gremillion
這段落的中心思想說明:“ The advantages of the
final examination”。首句先點明主旨,並以戲劇班為例,加強主題的說服力,每句的意思都環繞著這個中心開展,作出比較,最後一句撮要本段意思。
現以表列出此段之結構,令大家更容易明白。
| Topic: |
The advantages of a
final examination |
| Topic
Sentence: |
A final examination
in a course will give a student the initiative to do his or
her best work throughout the course. |
| Supporting
Details: |
(Reasons:) |
| If there is no final
examination, some students: |
| 1) will not try their
best. |
| 2) take poor notes |
| 3) throw away the notes
after each short test |
| 4)
skip class |
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| Conclusion: |
(what
kind of conclusion: hope for change, summary or advice?) |
Students would have to
take good notes and attend all classes in order to be
prepared for the final examination.
(summary) |
Exercise:
- Divide
the following paragraph into three parts: introduction,
supporting details and conclusion.
- Which
sentence has the main idea of the paragraph?
- The
writer must support his main idea. How many reasons or examples
does the writer give?
- Does
the writer give details to explain each reason or example?
- Does
the writer use any special
words in the
discussion to help you understand how many reasons or examples
he has?
- What
does the conclusion do? Does it give a summary, hope for a
change or give advice?
Times Squares is unquestionably the center of
entertainment in New York City. There are nearly a hundred Broadway
theaters and Off-Broadway stages. People can choose many kinds of
musicals from international well-known classical to lively and
unusual productions. For example, I have seen several Broadway shows
like “Cats” and “Miss Saigon.” I enjoyed the emotional songs
and experienced their joys and sadness. Besides Broadway theaters,
there are a lot of movie theaters in which most recent Hollywood
first-run films are shown. People can see different popular films
and spend a whole day in these theaters. Moreover, during lunchtime,
there are some street performances such as Jazz and Hard Rock.
People crowd the street and listen to ethnic and experimental music
with special sound effects. As a result, no one feels bored in Times
Squares as it brings her or him a rich variety of entertainment like
Broadway musicals, movies and street shows.
| Topic sentence: |
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First reason:
Support: |
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| Second reason:
Support: |
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Third reason:
Support: |
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| Conclusion: |
What kind of
conclusion: hope for change, summary or advice? |
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